autumn sky/crystal clear/renews the spirit I think autumn sky gives us crystal sky, so the meaning of autumn sky includes crystal sky in the spirit of Japanese haiku. it will be better that your second line can cahange some other words. Ikuyo
My friend Mr Isao Shinozaki, teacher and mentor has helped me with translation to Japanese characters of my Haiku. I am very grateful for his help which is of great value for me. Domo Arrigato
autumn sky/crystal clear/renews the spirit
ReplyDeleteI think autumn sky gives us crystal sky, so the meaning of autumn sky includes crystal sky in the spirit of Japanese haiku. it will be better that your second line can cahange some other words. Ikuyo
the sound
ReplyDeleteof a frosty river --
harvest time